This is my 3rd and final revision. As a self publisher between my wife and I we found it difficult to step back and correct errors and adjust to some of the grammatical rules, however to be perfectly honest I did not want a publisher subtracting or adding to my story. Also, for those who hung in with me for the 1st and 2nd revision thank you. FYI I am releasing a follow up novel titled '5 years later-The 5th MIA. I hope you will give me a shot and...